In a style called “transitional,” this bedroom does straddle the traditional and modern borderlines. But it’s missing the mark in a few key ways. (Photo: Houzz | FAB Architecture)

This week I’m starting a new series of room critiques. The object here is to examine spaces that are inspiring and beautifully conceived; and yet, as with anything that have room for improvement. Without pandering to my own unique style (hint: the antiquier the better), I will include more modern and contemporary designs to showcase.

A Point

In the room shown above we have a medium-sized bedroom with a king-sized bed, a small chaise, nightstand, and dresser/TV stand. It’s styled minimally with a couple of framed art pieces and a pretty vase near the bed.

The colors are earthy and muted, mostly in beiges and medium browns.

What I like

The art. Thank God for the two spots of color on the walls. The art is eye-catching and nicely spaced.

The layout. I think the furniture placement is well done. It maximizes space and allows for traffic flow.

The bedding. Soft and luxurious, this bedding is a quiet invitation to rest.

The chaise. It’s very modern and a great size. One should always have a chaise whenever possible.

What I would change

The accessories. I would add a standing lamp behind the chaise and also boost the artwork. Maybe a trio of small pieces between the windows.

The rug. Nearly the same color as the duvet, the jute rug overwhelms with beigeness. Even the bed could really benefit from some patterned pillows.

The dresser/TV stand. Am I the only one that thinks this piece looks like something in a mid-range hotel? It does nothing for me. I get the attraction of clean lines but how about a shelving unit, maybe in a contrasting color?

Still modern and tasteful, this bedroom conveys a lot more personality. (Photo: Houzz | Lars Remodeling and Design)

A Counterpoint

For contrast, this midcentury bedroom excites the eye while still conveying restfulness and good taste. Walls and bed maintain clean neutrality while benefiting from the deep blue details in the rug, foot bench, and painting.

So much of this is about personal taste. The object here is not to impose style choices as “good” or “bad” but to help you learn more about design principles and how they can enhance your own space in exciting ways.

More to follow!

The Velvet Chaise

Room for Improvement